Emotions Poem by Thomas

Lonely

It tastes like you’re the only person on earth.
It smells like horror.
It feels like death.
It sounds like my ear drums have burst.

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14 Responses to “Emotions Poem by Thomas”


  1. 1 Jackie 15 March, 2010 at 11:30 am

    Great poem thomas! I hope you don’t feel lonely too much.

  2. 3 veronica 15 March, 2010 at 11:34 am

    I like the part you’re the only person on earth 😀

  3. 4 manfred 15 March, 2010 at 11:37 am

    I like the bit that the ear drums burst 😀

  4. 5 conor 16 March, 2010 at 11:11 am

    I love the part that the ear drum burst.:D

  5. 6 conor 16 March, 2010 at 11:15 am

    😀
    😛

    Your gggggggggggggooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddd

  6. 7 tegan 16 March, 2010 at 11:36 am

    Grat woke Tomas.

  7. 8 charlotte 16 March, 2010 at 11:44 am

    tom i like the beat when you said your the only person

  8. 9 sam newland 16 March, 2010 at 4:32 pm

    hi thomas i like your poem

    Cheers sam

  9. 10 sam 17 March, 2010 at 11:42 am

    I like the part when it smells like Horror.

  10. 11 Vashti 17 March, 2010 at 4:19 pm

    Thomas, feeling lonely can be horrific. I think you’ve chosen some very strong images to let the reader know how awful it can be. Well done.

    PS: I’m glad it’s a feeling that goes away, too! 🙂

  11. 12 Ellen Hucker 18 March, 2010 at 7:04 am

    hi thomas great poem, from your sis

  12. 13 Michele Hucker 19 March, 2010 at 4:39 pm

    Fantastic descriptive words, Thomas.x

  13. 14 conor 20 April, 2010 at 11:25 am

    tom,hope you don’t fel loney


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