Tintin’s Treasure on the Moon

TinTin is  having a walk along in the cold cold snow with captain and Snowie. In the middle of nowhere they find a rocket the Rocket is red and gold. It was ready to fire. TinTin, Snowie and captain walk into the rocket. Tompson and Tomson are inside the rocket hiding somewhere. When Tintin and the rest walk inside the rocket they find Tomson and Tompson  hiding behind the door in the rocket.

Tintin gets the rocket started. Tintin , Snowie and captain are trying to find treasure on the Moon. When Tintin gets to the moon he sees a bunch of  Aliens with really powerful guns are  garding the treasure. When you get shot with guns you will turn into an really ugly alien with a big big red beard

By Conor, Sean, Snowie and Big Doggy (Conor’s doggy)

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3 Responses to “Tintin’s Treasure on the Moon”


  1. 1 Sean Mum Jo 7 August, 2010 at 12:03 pm

    Wow boys, what an amazing story. What happens next? Does Tin Tin or Snowie get shot? Are the Aliens mean or kind? What do the Aliens eat? Tell me more… Jo

  2. 2 conor 10 August, 2010 at 11:53 am

    It was made from 3 storys tintin in tibet, tintin exspors the moon and tintin somthing somthing tresure.

  3. 3 Claire 10 August, 2010 at 4:45 pm

    Brilliant story … Loved it


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